All Comments on 'Emma'

This is not incest. If had gucked his cousin then okay. But this is a story about him nailing his cousins wife. That means it's just a guy fucking a woman.

Sorry, nothing 'original' here...

I really try to encourage writers, because I am one (or try to be) & I know its not easy. However, I'm going to break that 'rule'.

You should have sent this as a 'How To' story - ie:

How to write something utterly devoid of originality.

I will not be as critical as others. I genuinely loved your story. And to differ with at least one opinion, it is a story of incest. She is his cousin by marriage. For doubters look up the definition for cousins. One of the first things to learn as a writer is that others love to criticize. Fuck them. Continue to write. I will continue to read.

So is my wife's younger sister.

A really DULL story: no character development, no motivation, the sex lacks both detail and interest; no variety in sentence structure; etc. etc. Sorry, man, but it's a waste of time.