by sumbody777
Loved the story....a chapter 2'is definitely in order....maybe Chris and his girlfriend and Emma....or Chris and his buddies and Emma....or Chris does Emma during the day when she skips school....lots of posdibilites....nice story...good grammar and spelling....keep it up!!!
Definitely enjoyed this. Emma should continue sneaking around with Chris. Family BBQ??
This is an excellent and sexy story, that is not unique, but shows real style. Maybe slow the progression of their relationship down a bit, but I sure hope you keep writing because you have talent and I think the theme has the potential for many stories with exhibitionism of the main character or perhaps a new series with another young lady :-) Keep writing
Love this. You should definitely write anther one with more sneaking around.
Wow... I couldn't stop reading, it was amazing, sexy and hot. Please write more...
Thanks everyone, I'm so glad you all liked it! I'll definitely write another one soon. A neighborhood barbeque is a good idea, thanks anonymous! :)
Are you going to update soon? I really want to know what happens next.
Please write some more! Wonderful story I would love to see how it progresses between the two!