All Comments on 'Emma and Her Neighbor'

by sumbody777

Sort by:
  • 9 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Emma's Midnight Swim

Loved the story....a chapter 2'is definitely in order....maybe Chris and his girlfriend and Emma....or Chris and his buddies and Emma....or Chris does Emma during the day when she skips school....lots of posdibilites....nice story...good grammar and spelling....keep it up!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good job

Definitely enjoyed this. Emma should continue sneaking around with Chris. Family BBQ??

sunsoakersunsoakeralmost 10 years ago
very hot

This is an excellent and sexy story, that is not unique, but shows real style. Maybe slow the progression of their relationship down a bit, but I sure hope you keep writing because you have talent and I think the theme has the potential for many stories with exhibitionism of the main character or perhaps a new series with another young lady :-) Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Do it!

Love this. You should definitely write anther one with more sneaking around.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
omg... more please.... pretty please...

Wow... I couldn't stop reading, it was amazing, sexy and hot. Please write more...

sumbody777sumbody777almost 10 years agoAuthor
reply

Thanks everyone, I'm so glad you all liked it! I'll definitely write another one soon. A neighborhood barbeque is a good idea, thanks anonymous! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
loved it

definitely want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
next story

Are you going to update soon? I really want to know what happens next.

sexykitty96sexykitty96almost 9 years ago

Please write some more! Wonderful story I would love to see how it progresses between the two!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous