All Comments on 'Emma and Juliet'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This was a mess

I could barely keep up with anything here. Even the fucking description was raising questions being that (in shakespeare) Juliet was only 13. Then you just materialize a kid out of nowhere to explain why Juliet can suddenly lactate and never explain anything else that you'll bring up in the rest of the story save for the dildos. This needs serious work and really should be classified as an outline of anything.

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