All Comments on 'Emma and Naomi Ch. 01'

Made me so wetj

from Jade's slut

this would have been a good story, except for the handcuffs, and if there is no more handcuffs, or anything else like that then yes the story line is pretty good

This story made me so horny. Which of these characters represent you?

Beautifully sexy. There's a foxiness yo eachcharacter, a beautiful kindness to the dom & sub. The cuffs were great. Just because somebody has a problem with cuffs is no reason to crimp your storytelling. There were some mistakes that could have been caught by having an editor eork with you, but this was a beautifully crafted erotic gem. 5 stars for a story well told & unique, unlike so much of what gets posted here. And YES, more.