by fuckmehotstuff
Not a bad sex scene, but lacking in story and there was no Halloween theme at all. This would have been better as a scene in a longer story where you told us a little about the characters first. You know, like foreplay.
Thanks guys! I definitely agree that some more backstory is a great thing, but you know - I was in the mood to get to the "point" the night I wrote this ;) I'll make sure to give some more context and depth next time <3