All Comments on 'Emmaline Ch. 01'

amazingly well written!!!!

if predictable story. This story has been told many many times and is only saved by the quality of writing. I usually stop reading as soon as a penis is called a 'dick'. What a stupid word! It pulls down the quality immediately. I know it is another example of 'American English' like 'slut'. Also the U.S. writers concentration with 'college life' is a big turn off to readers who are not from the U.S.A..

I loved this story, my favorite of yours so far! Very sexy details, great storyline and characters too. I'm eager to read more!

You consistently use the sexiest character in erotica: a gorgeous, young, but sexually confident woman. "Danielle" is one of the hottest stories on this site, and that story had the potential to go both into her past (Marisa, professor girl on girl) and future (Marisa setup or threesome), that this type of character allows. So, I can't wait to see where a multi-part story from you will go.

I loved it - great story! Glad you recommended it - E. :o)

Love it!! Love all your stories!! Definately ready for more!!

MORE SEEMS TO BE THE OVER RIDING SENTIMENT..

ditto... OMG .! 14 years ago