All Comments on 'Emmaline Ch. 02'

This chapter was incredible. I absolutely love the chemistry between Emma & Jack. They are by far my favorite twosome out of all your stories. It's evident that there's a lot more to come, which is very exciting! I can't wait!

Brilliant idea to do a continued series! This is what I hoped you'd do with the Danielle or Lisette stories, and you're looking to surpass those as my favorite. I can't wait to see Emma have her first bi experience, her greek friend finally getting Emma, and lucky Jack in the middle (always wondered how a Dani/Marissa pairing would have gone in your Danielle story). The couples scenario is intriguing as well. Given the high quality of your past writing, I can't wait to see these adventures unfold.

Hope you continue this series, Gapster. I enjoy your writing very much.

--Abby

she does all my fantacies! cant get enough of her!

I love what you started with this story line, and I'm a bit disappointed that no one else appears to have encouraged you to continue it. I would be thrilled if you added more. Thank you!

It has great potential. Enjoy your writing very much. Keep up the good work and Happy New Year, Gapster!

not too late to start up again with this story

A great tale, I can't wait to see how Emma and Jack continue their exploits 5 stars