All Comments on 'Emmy and Her Daddy Ch. 01'

Love it. Is there a part 2

for a woman, you sure do see sexuality from a man's perspective. Let's have MORE!

It's because Mary is a guy!

great story. well written. but wtf with the ending???

more please!

In the first part, he nails her....In the second, an apparent flashback, they just get to firting?

Good story, but doesn't make any sense...because you didn't finish the second section, thus completing the episode.

*

What does yoga have to do with one's ability to tighten, release, contract, or utilize the muscles in the vagina? I am able to tighten the muscles and hold them for several minutes or tighten and release repeatedly to make it feel as though there are lots of fingers massaging my husband's dick. I have never taken a yoga class, and hope no one would seek it out because of some misleading information. The ability to contract those muscles is a huge benefit when having a baby. Tightening and holding them several times a day keeps them from getting weak and lowers the chances to require an episiotimy during labor and delivery.

Why did the story start off with a bang and end with a whimper? It makes little sense to try and get readers aroused if the arousal is not able to be maintained. Hopefully the next story will not have what reads like a story told in reverse.

This story made absolutely no sense at all.

You absolutely had me for the entire story. I'm going to look for more writings from you. Hope I'm not disappointed.

Thank you for a wonderful read.

Why do so many people start ragging without bothering to look at the title, where it clearly says Ch. 01:, meaning theres more to come? Its not brain surgery, lol.

Well, its' hot, but its backward; why start rigth out with her coming in and screwing him? There is no character development to that part, and if you removed the word "daddy" from it, it would just be sex between two people....and not even the first time they did it. Just like it was perfectly normal. That's not the whole idea of taboo sex it's supposed to be life-shaking and special, or kinky as hell. And then AFTER they do it, you get into the characters, but it's too late by then, you've already read the end of the story. It's like a mystery novel where you read the description of the killer murdering the person, and then the rest of the book is an explanation of how the killer grew up and how they tracked him down. Doesn't have the right impact.

An amazing upbringing has come to fruition.