by PapaRomantic
Great start and I look forward to reading more. As a recent empty nester myself, I love the story line. Thanks.
Oh, my! This is a great story line with lots of potential chapters. Don't stop.
I particularly liked this because it was two married people spicing things up without cheating, swinging or hot-wifing. Plus really good writing.
If I wanted to put a leash on something it would not be my partner.
However, I agree with other commentators it is refreshing to hear of couples enjoying sex their way that does not involve a third party.
JJ
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
Try saying that out loud. LOL!
"Baby, if you produce that kind of orgasm for me again" Does any human being really talk that way, about producing orgasms?
Very good story, it takes 2 very special people to not take this style too far. 5 stars.
Another of your stories that are not stories. 3 chapters of documented sexual activity. I look to read STORIES. Second story I have read you failed to accomplish that. You're a writer and a good one when you choose to be. So be one... JZK