All Comments on 'Empty Nest Adventures Ch. 01'

by PapaRomantic

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great start

Great start and I look forward to reading more. As a recent empty nester myself, I love the story line. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very interesting

I think you are on to something here. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Oh, my! This is a great story line with lots of potential chapters. Don't stop.

ChuckEPooChuckEPooabout 7 years ago
Awesome married play

I particularly liked this because it was two married people spicing things up without cheating, swinging or hot-wifing. Plus really good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice but not my cup of tea

If I wanted to put a leash on something it would not be my partner.

However, I agree with other commentators it is refreshing to hear of couples enjoying sex their way that does not involve a third party.

JJ

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

Try saying that out loud. LOL!

"Baby, if you produce that kind of orgasm for me again" Does any human being really talk that way, about producing orgasms?

Grimjack01Grimjack01over 4 years ago
Wow excellent

Very good story, it takes 2 very special people to not take this style too far. 5 stars.

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Very cute story. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Another of your stories that are not stories. 3 chapters of documented sexual activity. I look to read STORIES. Second story I have read you failed to accomplish that. You're a writer and a good one when you choose to be. So be one... JZK

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I enjoy writing, but I am new to the erotic genre. I especially enjoy comments from readers telling me that they like my submissions, as well as constructive criticism, so I can become a better writer. All of my works are fiction - just fun for me and hopefully for you! I a...