All Comments on 'Ems Wins a Client'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Awesome!

Great story it was extremely sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Keep a better check on your characters, Andy undressed once in the bathroom and then again during their foreplay. Other than that a good effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Anne

Who is Anne and why does she pop up randomly in the middle of this story?

QuantockQuantockover 8 years ago
Gave Up

If he came out the bathroom in a robe, why does she need to undress him?

Gave up then as Ann confused me and I needed no more distractions.

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