by sugareola
I have to thank you for writing a good BM/WW story, there aren't many on this site. Not everyone wants to read the cuckold stories all the time.
I think the premise was really good, but the delivery was not up to par in that it seemed really fast-paced. This would be good in a series, or just something a bit longer to get really deep into the feelings of the two individuals. I think she forgave him way to easily for what he did.
As usual, thanks for the comments! I physically cannot write cuckold stories, so I'll just stay in my lane and hope my lovely, awesome readers drop me a comment or critique to encourage me before they surf away. Otherwise, I'll lose all my drive and never touch a keyboard again. If that sounds like shameless blackmail, it's probably because it is! What do you want me to tell you, I'm desperate!
On this one, I was aiming for a light, fluffy read. After finishing a rather heavy series, this was a palate cleanser. Was Zandra really too easy on Linc? I thought not, but never mind. There are plenty other stories up my sleeve with more length, twists and depth than this little upper. Do stay tuned! Thanks so much! :)
Love always,
sugar
Keep up the damn good work Sugareola. I'm standing and applauding your excellent work and asking for an Encore.