All Comments on 'Encounters with Evil Pt. 08a'

Oh my! That was totally worth waiting for

OMG I so love how you write and it was worth waiting for

Oh my!!!!!

Soooooo worth the wait!

More please 😊

Wow, cool, its my favorite story!!

I love this story, and have read it from start to finish without stopping! I can't wait to see what happens next...and to know who Ed is, how Jon gets on in his new job etc. Please continue to write this compelling tale.

Am continuing via your website :-) Thankyou!

As usual you have us hooked from start to finish. I gather this is not the end. Ed is Guy's sister isn't she? I know you can't answer and hope all will be revealed in more chapters. Why does Guy not know this though?

Also I would love to see Jon meet his perfect match too

give me hurt attack from the start to the end

Just finished reading through this, all 8 parts in one sitting because I couldn't tear away my attentions. This definitely needs part 8b, one last installment.

...Please?

There will be one more Chapter in this book. It should post in about a week.

I'm also planning to write a sequel (as you may have guessed from some of the content of this last chapter), but I may not start on that for a while.

Thanks for reading!

Good story, thank you - but please, don't write stuff like this: "I wasn't conscious for the second one, so I'm not sure it counts." Of course it "counts"! Rape devastates lives - there's far too much obfuscation about what constitutes rape - please don't add to the confusion.

Rape = 1 star

If you need rape to build suspense or be the monkey wrench in a potential HEA story you lack true talent. Its a cheap, lazy, and disgusting way to cut corners and add to the arch.

This story had potential but lacks sophistication in suspense and the antagonistic qualities of characters. Epecially if you want to make it a novella on an erotica site. Worse yet is that people get off on it, fucking freaks. I find it disturbing that people want to write or read about a 16 year old boy being raped and tortured. Then again as an adult and blow it off as no big deal. Both of your stories are this way. No matter how shitty a story one will always have followers. Dont let that fool you. Want to display real talent for erotica? Then lose the rape and maintain the suspense another way. Most people come here for the erotic aspect. Rape is not erotic it is boner repellant in normal people.