by silvarman
have to admit that the above has a point. i've read better. Keep trying though, the thread is good but it lacks some real meaty detail in the actual graphics of the act. I see you've only just started posting on here so good luck with that, try and get a bit more detail into the "sex" part though of the sequel as opposed to just he put it in came and took it out!!!
If this is an open marraige then why lie - is it more erotic to you??? You have already implied that no consequence is likely yet let us think the husband wanted to be part of her actions - but now he's excluded from her mind boggling author caused reversal of position. So, why is she hiding what she has done and plans to do unless she is cuckolding him. Not sensual or erotic just unfair, crude, cruel treatment of her loving husband. That is what you intended isn't it??? Many "non"-sick readers don't respect authors dealing in this theme in the Loving Wives Catagory. Do you intend to pour brainless wimpy disrespect on loving husband and us? Do you think anyone but a perverted pain seeking sickie would appreciate cuckolding? This cuckolding theme belongs in the FETISH catagory where it may be appreciated. You can do better. Regards
Does everyone in here become a critic? I know that this is just the begining of someones experiences and that hubby will be joining in and enjoying his new found wife's experience's soon enough. I think this is a great lead in to what is to follow,
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