All Comments on 'Enemy'

Interesting twists and turns..... one wonders if it will slide into incest, or girl on girl, or a daddy-daughter-enemy threesome?? Whatever route you take it....keep going!!

ChrisTor22- thank you so much for reading my story and taking time to leave a comment! You've definitely given me some stuff to think about for the continuation!

Loved the plot twist. Great story leading up to fantastic sex scenes. I hope you keep writing, I enjoy your writing and hope to see more from you in the future. You've got a lot you could do with this story in the future, but all your stories leaves one to use their imagination of "what will happen next."

You really did make me feel hot!!!! One of the best I've read so far! keep writing for the sake of more than a thousand people

Fnddmo- Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

Anonymous- Thank you so much! Comments telling me to keep on writing really mean so much to me!

Make it a threesome so hot

That naughty bitch deserves a good ass fucking.

I really liked how the story progressed. I think you should do this as a series. Show us what happens now that he is cheating on his wife and his daughter knows. I do like the threesome idea some people suggested but I would make it Cassie and one of Cassie's friends. Perhaps have them start after they tell Joey that Michelle is out so they can make her watch/listen from a closet they tied her up in or something. I would of course if it was going to be a series turn the tables later on Cassie and have Michelle get in better shape and seduce Cassie's dad perhaps?

This was "Talkman" and "Wannabeboytoy" good. Keep it up, the more evil, the better!

Way to early for his daughter to come at that exact time and moment I know its a bully story BUT COME ON MAN really... that and the half assed ending great start but lousy ending not bad definitely should do a series though.

i'd like to see her get revenge on her father and on Cassie

Revenge on Cassie and her Daddy.

You might need to go back to Jr. High and learn how & when to use went & gone in a sentence.

Can we get another chapter where Michelle gets revenge?

Amazing this needs a part 2

This is one of the best stories I have ever read please continue this story really hope Cassie ends up because Michelle stepmom

This deserves a part 2 need to know what happens next be great if Joey and Cassie ends up cuckolding his wife!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are a great writer and this was an incredibly hot story it's very sad you never continue this as you could have done so much with this story.

The father would have been in shock no way would he have threatened his daughter. He pays for everything does he great in the divorce he will still be paying for everything wen Michelle bides her time an gets lots of video evidence every teenager has a mobile phone he’s a complete idiot an all for Cassie to make a point I like him to lose everything