All Comments on 'English for Sinners'

I can't wait for more,!!

was this supposed to be ch1?

Yes, this chapter is moreso the prologue than anything else, and is not indicative of the level of sexual content in the rest of the series (the next chapter, in fact, has lots of fun stuff going on).

There are ways to introduce more dramatic tension into the story closer to the beginning. I actually started with a later part of the story and then came back to the beginning. I do not know that I would have stayed with the story if I had started at the beginning.

Thanks for the contribution. The story gets better. I don't know how necessary it was for us to read all of this introductory matter.

The names seem too similar and could name it hard to distinguish them in the future.

I enjoy your elegant and descriptive style of writing, and the fact that your story has very few errors overall - especially when compared to the literal burning dumpster fires of other stories (0.0) I look forward to reading more from you! :)

The supernatural aspects of later chapters are not really my cup of tea, but your girls, their outfits, the sizzling and devilishly-creative seduction and sex play, all of that is top notch! Thank you.