All Comments on 'English Summer Tales Pt. 01'

by ElectricBlue

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JasonClearwaterJasonClearwaterover 6 years ago

You did good with this, mate. I never did like her ending up with Lyle. She's better off in Alex's hands.

holliday1960holliday1960over 6 years ago
Wonderfully rich collaboration.

When I beta-read this, it proved that the first collaboration was no fluke. You two gentlemen blend writer's voices like milk and honey. I never had any idea that the two of you would become such a writers 'dream-team', but you have, and you are... So, look out Lit-world!

Keep dazzling the readers with your lovely tales, boys! (or is that, tails?) *shrugs* (either way, carry on!)

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckover 6 years ago
WOW

I was hungry for the next chapter immediately after finishing this one

steverob1054steverob1054over 5 years ago
Thank you EB

Yet another amazing, beuatifully written and beautifully crafted story EB, thank you so much for sharing it with us

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Loved it - when is the next chapter coming?

ElectricBlueElectricBluealmost 4 years agoAuthor

Where is the next chapter?

A fair way off, I think. I have too many ideas, but I hope to return to Lucy and Alex one day.

stickygirlstickygirlalmost 3 years ago

Intelligent, sexy writing - what more could we want? Thanks EB

Darkness_Overlord97Darkness_Overlord97almost 2 years ago

I hope we’ll be able to see more of Lucy and Alex in the distant future

rayironyrayironyover 1 year ago
Sweet

and gracefully poetic.

Satisfying contrast between Lucy's lovers

AG31AG316 months ago

I was hooked by the time Lucy exited the alley. After Alex entered the scene I didn't care if there was ever any explicit sex. But there was, and it was just as good. Just a perfect story! Maybe it's good that there's no Part 2 or 3. This stands on its own.

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.