All Comments on 'Enjoying Your Wife'

Strangely, I seem to have amnesia! I can't remember any of this. Who are you, again? I'm pretty sure I don't know this Sue person, either. One of us is insane.

Writing was really poor, topic was sissy boy UK cuck garbage 101

Not a bad effort. The writing was okay but the second person perspective is extremely difficult to pull off. That didn't happen here, either. In erotic stories, the second person perspective only truly works if the woman is telling the story. Just my two cents. At any rate, 3*** for effort. Keep writing!

Fist let me ask a question: Is this an instruction manual? Because that's what second person is good for. If you want to write a story you do it in first or third person, never in second.

Second: it was poor writing.

Soldier boy had it right; keep writing

Disregard Anonymous always a critic never a writer

Those that can write do,Those that have no idea how to write just bitch..

HOT, nothing good to say, not even a flash

I am not married. Maybe you were referring to your own mother and writing the story for your father!

Well, you've certainly embraced your inadequacy with humility and honesty. Bravo!

But some of us know what tastes good, and what is good literature. This is a piece of shit.

And if you think the husband's actions are so cool, please post your wife's phone number. God, how do you stand being so intellectually superior?

100s of guys.

Nasty. And NOT in an sexy or erotic manner. Is anyone THAT stupid?

I, you, Sue. Strange swapping of POV. Unsettling. Not nice.

Bigslimes writing another masterpiece.

Im still pee'ing my pants from laughing too damned hard. But hey at least you managed to make something hard with this one.

Hogwash and horse hockey.