All Comments on 'Enslaved by One, Enjoyed by Many'

by Mistressmichelle69

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FASfanFASfanalmost 7 years ago
A nice introduction to a new author's talent

Thank you, Mistressmichelle69 for sharing your debut story with us. I hope you will write lots more for us to read! Well done -- five stars and a favourite.

ManosHandsManosHandsalmost 7 years ago
I agree...

..that it is an excellent start. Thanks for submitting. I'll be on the lookout for more from you. (Let me know)

T

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Liked this one

Nice little twist at the end. Leaves us guessing how he reacted to his clothes missing, and whatever comes next...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nicely written!

You've written a lucky man!

I liked your story for several reasons, one being that you could easily continue with either the story of meeting him at the beach, as alluded to when seeing him at the grocery store, or continue where you've left off.

Or both! I look forward to reading more of your stories!

MrMuse

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Looking forward to more

Nicely done.

Anonymous
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