All Comments on 'Enslaved Ch. 02'

wasn't she shot in her belly? How did she heal so quickly? I've missed something here.

I cant help but notice this closely follows hispet21's rebellious slave.

About the no wound question, that is my fault as I did not explain clearly enough. The bullet is actually magical energy and hence did not leave a physical wound, but did have several side effects.

I actually idolize hispet21's the rebellious slave, so I may have unknowingly used his style of writing. However, I do not intend for my plot to follow hispet21, it is merely a coincidence and I will take caution to prevent this from happening again.

Thanks for your comments :)

~nic

This is really good! I hope to see more soon!!

You have a great story there!

I love it!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!

I sure hope the answer is no...

Hope you continue this story

Please, please finish your story. It's really interesting and would be a shame to leave these questions unanswered