All Comments on 'Enslaving Elliot Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
another great addition to the Elliot saga...

Great to see the fulfilment of the carla-elliot relationship, as with the others parts its a sexy plot which is well written and visualised by MTL17. Only concern is that the one-on-one lesbian domination of elliot can become just a little repetitive-as a suggestion maybe adding another character (e.g. JD's girlfriend Kim) could make for a really hot lesbian threesome! Other than that I love it, more than once some of your stories have had me sliding my hand under my skirt in the bathroom at work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

its hot do more pls...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Carla and Elliot make a hot couple! more please

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