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by HankDolworth

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mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 11 years ago
I loved it - thank you

I particularly liked the dedication - it made me smile ;) ! To a Dom I know - nicely done.

Good work, four stars and thanks again.

kinky_little_kittenkinky_little_kittenalmost 11 years ago
Enthralled

i love this piece it is evocative and appealing on many levels.

Amazing work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Nicely done, even with your several typos and mis-spellings. You got the interaction correctly, even though I don't care for "breath play." Keep them cumming

PlaynhrdPlaynhrdabout 5 years ago
well done

I do not comment often, but I completely enjoyed this story, its circular narrative, its nice use of timing and imagery, the and the implied conspiracy of the characters.

nyteramblernyteramblerabout 2 years ago

Dam this one needs another chapter to many loose ends.

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