by sgt.d069
Wow! Great story - There's nothing sexier than hot, beautiful women in an office wearing suits and skirts over their stockings and high heels!!
Good story (sexy story line, hot descriptions of situations), but you can tell this was written by a man. It reads too much like a script for a porno, and uses words that are on the edge of derogatory (slime). I think this could be written with less bias and more realistically, therefore appealing to a wider audience (like real women in addition to men). Otherwise, not bad and keep writing.
You did a great job on this story. Please write a second chapter.
I want to find out how good the new secretary is at her new "job."