All Comments on 'Envy Ch. 02'

Thank you for posting another chapter .. I really love this story ...

Loving this story. It feels 'real'...real life with real life issues. I can't wait for the next chapter. The chapters could be a bit longer too. When a great story is being read...it sucks when it seems over to fast.

If you wrote, "He drew his brows together" one more time, I was going to have to scream. Instead, I'll just give you a pass in the future. You need an editor, dude. Everyone does.