All Comments on 'Equal Shares Ch. 01'

by steveh11

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good start

Just read part one,you certainly know how to write.Now that you have established the base for what promises to be a very good story,I shall read on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Totally Convincing

with no jaring notes, other than the disengagement itself! :-) Well done, and I shall follow on reading the full story.

Roger B

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Hi great story to read and yes it does have an ending so enjoy it

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