All Comments on 'Equal Shares Ch. 11'

I have read the first 11 chapters of your story 'Equal Shares' and in my opinion you've responded to the challenge by Strickland83 in a surprising way for a first time writer.

An original storyline, characters that are believable and evolve from chapter to chapter and, most importantly, one or more thorough editors, who've made a good job of it.

I look forward to finding out, where this is going to end.

This story is building very slowly but for some reason I can't let it go, you have got my interest. Very well written with a very "real" feeling story line. With a bit of work you could probably write a novel. I will read this one all the way through. Thanks for a wonderful story!

what a romantic you are Steve.I thought the John Denver song summed up the whole episode.