All Comments on 'Erection for the 80's'

This was a wild one, very exciting and action-filled in a most humorous way.

But some of the descriptions were jarring.

She had Square Feet? What, were they long and wide covering a large area?

She Balled her Toes? A person balls their hand into a fist by curling all the fingers at once. A female is often described as curling her toes in passion, but never heard of balling the foot.

She Balled his Collar? They were running bare-assed from the evil police androids, so it couldn't have been a shirt collar or jacket collar. I seem to have missed the part where she put a leather dog collar on him.

And my favorite misused verb of all writers, GRINDED. Look for that in a dictionary. the word is Grind, Grinding and Ground, no such thing as grinded.

Again, a good story, quite entertaining and enjoyable. Thank you for read. Four Stars.