All Comments on 'Erica's Boots'

by Scheherazade73

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PrfsrPrfsralmost 11 years ago
Dan's early meeting

Dan's early meeting should be with his kid's guidance counselor! Might be fun to see what happens next.

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantalmost 11 years ago
Top quality stroke

Not much of a story - but hell, people don't go to Literotica to uncover some Joseph Conrad in the rough

You do need to be a little more careful in the proofreading department:

... Dawntee was ... a night owl, a drag queen

... Dawntee opened the door, a puzzled expression on her face,...

"Well, if it isn't my neighbor," she purred.

If Dawntree is a drag queen, then he is a HE, who dresses as a SHE and will expect/demand to be addresses as SHE in public. That doesn't change the fact that the individual is male, and in the omniscient third person POV employed by the author Dawntree is a HE even if in conversation in which he participates he is referred to as SHE

DesireeFoxDesireeFoxalmost 11 years ago
Very Delicous

and a bit of sentimental ending. Her first appointment on Monday should be with Dan to discuss his children.

I was sort of disappointed in the boots description, though very few can stand in Ballet boots with 7 inch heels. Took me several weeks to get to where I could stand and walk around for an hour, now I can dance run just about everything, my favorite though is wrapping them around the back of y beloved as they fuck me, Oh too much fun

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 11 years ago
Delicately written

and deliciously arousing. But you could use an editor to iron out the tiny imperfections.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it

Very arousing, decently put together, great magnetism between Erica and Xavier. And call me a sap, but I like my sex turning into passion towards the end. ;) Thumbs up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it

You should write more about them. See where things go from here.

DiannahDiannahalmost 11 years ago
4 stars

I never thought I'd read a "beautiful" group sex story, but this is it! Emotionally touching, erotic, and just well-written.

It isn't often I say this after a good story, but don't write a sequel. You can't improve on this story, and the ending is just right.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Another boots story at last!

It was so good to be able to read a new boots story. Most of the stories on here are years old and have been read too many times. But this story was was really and truly arousing - a boot fetishist's dream! We need more boots stories please, Literotica!

Willow_CreekWillow_Creekover 10 years ago
Good boots story

It's great to read a story which features sexy boots.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love the boots

I have always found thigh high boots incredibly erotic and the story tes of the woman who I would love to meet. Great story and we'll written. Thanks.

sticks13sticks13over 4 years ago
Boots and ...........

Great story and the boots do what they're known for and prove why they're sexy, I love it.

I'm not sure the other comments are really correct about your style but I suppose they're only opinions and we all know what opinions are don't we?

Keep writing because I think your good at it and you know how to get the right amount of sex, feelings, views and interest keeping in a story to keep it going.

As I said before "I love it" and thank you for sharing it.

PS. Do some more boot stories and wear yours more. ;o)

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