All Comments on 'Erica's Debut'

Absolutely brilliant story, well written, interesting story line kept me hooked to the end. Cant wait to read all your other stories but for now Im just going to go and relieve the tension.

If it were broken into two or three parts instead of one long story.

But very hot all the same. Keep up the great work!

Being allowed to clean up your beautiful wife's cum laden pussy!! Hot fresh creampie YUMMY!!! I can hardly wait to read more..... the gang bang sounds delicious!! Thanks for a Very HOT story.

I loved this story. It was decriptive and one of my favorite fantasys. Until the end. Why couldn't have just been the time thing they wanted. Or even an occasional good time. No need to become a gang bang and to shut the husband out.

All the way through the story she was a loving wife, until the end. She was giving her husband a fantasy and enjoying the activities herself. Why couldn't she just keep on thinking of her husband as the one man that she is totally in love with. I think it ruined the whole effect of the story when she became just another domineering slut, who humiliated her husband by making him grovel for her affection. She stated that she was going to a gang bang even if he couldn't be there,going against his wishes of her never having sex without him. It's just a shame that the author couldn't let her continue to be a loving wife, and take her husband in her arms and make love to him, instead of disrespecting him. It is a well written piece of work, even if I didn't like the ending, I did enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks for the post....Rich

well written and well done! i don't understand all the negative feedback you are getting; they must be either jealous of your writing or jealous they aren't the husband in the story! anyhow, hope to read another from you soon! again, GREAT story!

Quite realistic except for all the dildos. I cuckolded a guy with his cute, very excited wife right in front of him...lol I DID enjoy it and she must have had 10 serious orgasms to my 3. It started out the same, he wanted to watch her get fucked by a stud who would put her through her paces. She didn't want to do it at first but finally started to enjoy the idea. I was the second stud they had (the first one wasn't demanding enough..lol) so I did have her perform every sexual fantasy of mine. I had her blow me until I was super hard then I fucked her until we both had major orgasms. I called him over and told him to "get down there and lick her cunt out". She was totally-on by my demand and helped him get his face between her legs so he could suction on to her gaping, oozing cunt. She ended up sitting on his face to make sure that he got it all...LOL! After all, she wanted to obey me too! We did it again and again, each time, with her getting more dominant with him until she was treating him like her personal eunuch slave. Because of those encounters with them, I eventually found two other cute chicks who wanted to cuckold their husbands too. --- malapulga@yahoo.com

Thanks for a well-written and innovative story. Liked it all except for the ending, which did not seem to logically follow from the love between husband and wife.

Worth the 100% for the stimulation but these stories work better when they are more realistic.

Good marks for effort though and ity did turn me on.

I am amazed at how many people who hate this kind of story always read the whole thing in detail only to tell the writer how bad they are.

Keep writing,, Loved the story,, Wish I was there. bi48186bd@yahoo.com

follow this path. I thought the story was incredibly hot. Whether it's plausible or not is hard to tell, although it is quite a transformtion in a very short period of time. Still, got me turned on.

great story!! wish my wife would do the same with me! Please continue

Love the story of Erica's Debut Chapter 1

Looking forward to the next chapter

I have often longed for my wife to be this open

And I fantasized it was her

Thanks

Joe

Brilliant story, very sexual, made me wish I was Erica's Husband..... The only difference if I was, I would of been securely locked up in my Chastity Device and Erica would have given the key to Mark for safe keeping. (But that's just me). I really can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you pervinplainpackage.

Because they are old folks and, even if they were younger and had sex appeal, not very realistic.

its lovely to read a wife getting seduced and fucked solidly by the young lad ... and the cleaning part is most eciting

What a fucking moron ! guys like him need to be shot right between the eyes. I just have a hard time believing that there are real guys out there that would do something like this. I myself would have beat the unholy shit out of the bellboy and threw is sorry ass out into the hallway naked then sued the hotel chain.

I enjoyed the story as it was well written and flowed reasonable well. There is lots of scope for character development which author's need in multi chapter stories.

In response to sinsational83 comments which are of a valid opinion.

The husband character in the story had suggested the wife that she should take a lover. She has only escalated his fantasy. The inviting over other men to fuck her is perhaps going a tad far, however this is only a fictional story.

the husband is a wimp and a simp

I have been reading on this site for a while. I have enjoyed this story more than any other. Would love to be in your place in this situation.

Wow how erotic. Not. 1*

erotic and good for a cuck story. keep writing really piss off the asshloe of LIT dear annony!!

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!

Very erotic as she takes control of her husband and her lover for her pleasure and theirs!

So good. Your story made me cum so hard, so many times and still more to cum. I can't wait. Thank you!

I've given a 5 star rating only twice. Wish I can give you a sixth. Though a tad lengthy, your words and theme flowed perfectly; and your eloquent writing style and grammar was on point throughout. Major kudos to you Erica. Wish I could employ you to write my verbose biog story.

enjoyed it throughout. five stars from me also. love the writing style.

Beautiful story! I love it!

But i dont like him bring called pet

Forget the fact that his wife has shown him by her words and actions that she has no love or respect for him. Accept the fact that she's carrying several std's and there's no way in hell her husband would touch her with a ten foot pole. His next action will be to file for a divorce from the slut. Ridiculous, unbelievable ending.

1 star

How sick and twisted these cuck writers must be. What a fine example pathetic and perverted loser Dad must be who turns his wife into a full blown whore. It takes a special class of sick and sad moron to want this life. Thanks for reminding us there are worse things than Covid 19.

Did you really think this was good?

Ever met a real woman? Yeah they dont suddenly turn slut and in this case if she did she also stopped loving or respecting her husband.

So either you're still stuck with a teenage boys fantasy or youre hiding in a closet.

So - turn yourself into a cheating slut and be proud? Divorce is coming.

1 Star

Disgusting cuck shit.

26thNCuck Disapproved

Very well thought out story. Not sure how believable it was to have the wife swing so far from how she was before to meeting three men. I think that was maybe just a test to check how fast she could push.

The surprising thing is I didn’t find it that exciting. There were some many new ideas thought up by the wife I found my attention pulled onto whet she would think up next instead of the sex.

Excellent marriage, good loving husbands want their wife to enjoy other lovers and later show their devotion cleaning the cocks and savoring the creampie.

A cuckold marriage that's in the open with friends knowing leads to best party life, cruises, pool parties and friendly get togethers. Husbands, lets yo wives have fun!!!!

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