by Erica_Gasca
Erica, I always like your stories of hot-blooded young Latinas, but this one was EXCELLENT! Makes me wish I had one available to me!
The story was great, but, you need to proof read your stories or have someone do it for you. With all the mistakes it is hard to read.
Great story! Wonderful action and descriptions. Keep up the fine work
Since your first few stories,your stories are now erotic and very entertaining.There may very well be a few trivia that some will pick on,but maximum points from me .J.
Couldnt find time to read it through,but you found time to make an inane comment.I know a few hot blooded Spanish ladies who would sort you out.Keep writing Erica avoid idiots at all costs.
Your stories are among my favorite and they keep getting better! As a latina I love how you mix spanish in there..very sexy!
this is the second story that ive read from u and i hate the fact that ur using spanish and english. just because spanish is the second language in USA doesn't mean EVERYONE knows it !!!just pick ONE language
Great story! i am also an Oakland Raiders fan and i liked you mixing in the Spanish, as it is my 3rd language (2nd being German). KEEP ON WRITING!
You are an excellent erotic writer. Read your Glory Hole Daughter story then looked thru your list of work and found this one. Very fucking hot. I'll have to browse thru the rest of your work when i have more time. I'm excited. Thx.
The raiders still suck and mexicans don't have big dicks.
But I am sure most mexican girls are nasty sluts, but by age 20 are big fat pigs and don't have tight pussies!
I see you wrote years ago...
Your stories are among the best!
Please consider writing more...
In any case, Thank You!
Another great story. I really enjoyed it. Being a Raiders fan, I really enjoyed it that much more and wish something similar would happen to me. Sorry to say, the Raiders are rarely on TV in Arizona. We are stuck watching the (I say) crappy Cardinals. Oh well. The story would have been just enjoyable if it was another team. Keep writing.
Damn!
This is the steamiest story I have read in a long time. I wish it continued.