All Comments on 'Eric's Internship'

I think you have a great set-up. Nice dream sequence that ALMOST came true. I can't wait for the second installment!

Great job can't wait to read more!5

Great possibility on this story, you've left lots of story lines and plots that can happen. It could be a really good read, don't stop!

Hi Rheyn - I really enjoyed this story, but to use a musical analogy it ends on an imperfect cadence; everything about the chord/ending says that the tune/story wants to move on rather than finish there :-)

I know you've been busy with Amy, but do you have plans to return to Eric, Melody and Mrs Rose someday soon? Thx

Hey! Ty for the comment, means a lot to me! I have been toying at the idea of revisiting one of my other stories since I just finished Amy's forth chapter. With your comment I may do just that with Eric's internship!

Good idea but terrible delivery and grammar.

Too much changing between past and present.

'He walks through the hallway, his dress shoes clicking against the floor causing an echo.' - no! He walked through etc.

Learn to use to and too you got it wrong several times.

Just so annoying.