All Comments on 'Erik Nolan Ch. 05'

Looking forward to more. I seriously want to see Amie getting shaved by Eric. Would be cool if she gets tattooed and pierced too.

If Erik is as big a muscle stud as you tell us, he'd never pollute his body with cigarettes. I'd suggest dropping the smoking references in future parts. Other than that, 5 stars.

The reawakening of Amie.More please enjoyed the tale

So, are Amie's breasts "modest," as it says here in Ch. 05, or are they "large," as described in Ch. 04? It's hard for the reader to suspend disbelief when the author doesn't maintain consistency.

I think Amie took a very wrong decision in ditching her hubby. Kurt might have been dull but he was never a cheat. Throwing off so many years of attachment being seduced by a man for just a couple of days!! Amie was the foolest of all.