All Comments on 'Erika's Vow'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great Story!

Great story. Well written. I love the sexual tension with her submission. Can't wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Please continue! This story was amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Benefits of an Awesome Partner

A must for those with high stress positions. Needs being met engaging the thrill of a lifetime with a partner like Tom. Love!

storm_usmcstorm_usmcover 7 years ago
Really good!

Needs to be explored further, really great idea and good writing, now just keep going...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
You've started a series, but . . .

It seems you've abandoned the idea. You developed intriguing characters inside of a open, erotic plot line. And then left the story hanging, drifting in the wind. Somehow, this seems dismissive of your readers? You write well -- and often. I wonder of you just got bored with this story? Too bad.

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