All Comments on 'Erik's Transformation Ch. 01'

Excellent start to what I hope will be a good series involving mum milking her son dry in sexy outfits (featuring plenty of stockings and suspenders hopefully!)

A delightful story. Not only will the boy come out of his shell but his mother will now have a chance to express her womanly sexuality. who knows what may develop? With the doctor? With mom? Or with someone entirely new? Someone entirely new who annoys mom enough that she helps terminate the relationship and extend herself? The possibilities are endless.

Reads like literally hundreds of pieces of other incest stories here in Literotica and elsewhere....a snippet of this one, a snippet of that one...stitched together in the same old way. Ludicrous dialogue to boot. One would have to literally have NO sexual experience in real life to find this erotic.

great start nik, and welcome to the literotica. and congrats for well done, being a newcomer u write a so nice hot mother son story. hope u will do your best at next part. and give some hot incest between mother son relation.

waiting for the next........

This is not new, I've read something almost identical before, but, it's well written and the storyline is Hot. I'm looking forward to the next chapters where Mom drains Erik several times a day. We all know how she's going to end up draining him! Bring it on, I say!!

Great story, don't make us wait to long for the rest...

I'd like to see this as the first chapter in a series. I'm interested in where it could go. Please continue. Far too many authors post a story and for one reason or another don't continue when they've got a good beginning. This story had that, and you write well. I'd definitely be interested in reading more. Good job!

And check your silk panties for the need to put a new kotex in.

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My favorite type of stories, a mom salivating at seeing her son's beautiful cock. Can't wait for the following chapters.

Nice story but as another already mentioned, the Devil is in the details. More descriptions of characters/acts needed. You should try and stretch the story to a couple of pages and have a slower build up to the sexual antics. It was like wham bam it's over and on to the next chapter. I know this is very similar to 2 or 3 other stories but please continue as you have a great start. thank you and disregard the morons who have never added dick to this site except complaints.

Who cares what others say....

love the story also, an cant wait for part 2, love incest since i was a baby.

Please write this story to its conclusion. And many more other stories after this one!

I hope that mom gets excited enough to fuck her son.

NOW HOW DO YOU FINISH. THE SON IS HORNY , MOM IS HORNY, AND THAT DOCTOR IS IN HEAT. WHAT KIND OF DOCTOR MAKES HOUSE CALLS THESE DAYS. ONES THAT ARE UP TO NO GOOD.KEEP THIS STORY GOING, AND HAVE THIS KID FUCK MOM AND THE DOCTOR. ........LAROC OF AGES

I've read another story along these lines, by Tacocarnitas. That story mentions "exaggerated sexual characteristics " as well. I think the mother acts the same too. Even the premise seems the same. They may not be clones, but they seem damn close.

Eighteen year old boy who does not masturbate? This is beyond unbelievable. It's an interesting premise, but hardly convincing. I get it, that this is fantasy, but it's just... lame.

i am an 18 yr old boy that never masturbates so that part of the story is completely plausible

I'm Enjoying the story so far, and looking forward to reading the rest of Erik's and Kate's journey to their mind blowing end, and I'm hoping that Eric gets to get mum and maybe the doctor both pregnant.

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

Erick should see a different dr since he must be suffering from arthritic elbows, or does he have no fingers to jerk off with?

and drinks cum, he hates everything. That's because he has never gotten laid or had a woman who stayed with him more than a day after being paid. This story is going to be great because you are ta\king your time. FUCK YOU ANNONY YOU"RE A REAL ASSHOLE

Does the doctor have to make so many home visits? 😑

Hot!

In the opening paragraph you said Erik was 5' 8" and then described him as tall. What ?

... that the story could be good. I think that you would benefit from help from someone that speaks english as their first language. This would help with your syntax; how you phrase your sentences. This is constructive criticism, just a suggestion.

I know that you wrote this a long time ago and the story is finished. I'm moving on to the next chapter.

As an avid reader of mother/son incestuous love stories, this is starting off on sound footing. I like logical story development. I like indepth character development. I enjoy plausable plots. Mother/som have been together since the age of 13 (son's). Mother has been everything to him. He is 18 but she sees him as a child and treats him as a child. The son sees his mother as a cook, housecleaner, driver, maid, and mother/parent. He does not see her as a woman and she has never attempted to demonistrate to him that ishe is a woman. She has not dated. She has not dressed up in an attractive manner. Even if she did, her son probably not recognize her effort.