by JoseRick
It was a great story....loved the build up :P Keep them coming :P
Good. It would have been a great story but it ramble and was padded. Thankfully, there was no anal content.
Lukas
Your exceptional use of description and rising action made this one quite the read. Very hot! Of course, the sequel won't be as good (they usually aren't unless they're a series-type) but this one is flawless, considering the content.
You couldn't have described my own Uncle/Niece obsession better than if I had dictated it off to you personally. I have lusted for her for over twenty long gut wrenching years. Guts? I don't have any! Just a great story.
Good incest. Great description of the fucking. The fact that he screwed his niece and orgasmed three times was so cool. Knowing they were going to continue fucking was even better. A loving uncle fucking his loving niece is natural and fine.
This guy is going to have HERO fuck the little girls hole that is full of shit and make the resulting shit covered cock and stink filled room seem romantic
...next time, write more dirty talk into your story and yes, do some anal sex....i'd love to read about having his hard cock fucking his sweet little niece's asshole!