All Comments on 'Erin & Ryan'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very Nice!

It was a great story....loved the build up :P Keep them coming :P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
yea buddy

hell yes now do her sweet lil asshole

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
E + R

Good. It would have been a great story but it ramble and was padded. Thankfully, there was no anal content.

Lukas

Alacar LeoricarAlacar Leoricaralmost 19 years ago
Well done!

Your exceptional use of description and rising action made this one quite the read. Very hot! Of course, the sequel won't be as good (they usually aren't unless they're a series-type) but this one is flawless, considering the content.

David48David48over 18 years ago
Lord...

You couldn't have described my own Uncle/Niece obsession better than if I had dictated it off to you personally. I have lusted for her for over twenty long gut wrenching years. Guts? I don't have any! Just a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very nice

If only I had an uncle like that!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
HOT ! HOT !!

Super story ! Could not stop reading !! Spellbound !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good incest

Good incest. Great description of the fucking. The fact that he screwed his niece and orgasmed three times was so cool. Knowing they were going to continue fucking was even better. A loving uncle fucking his loving niece is natural and fine.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A great tale but the handwriting is on the wall

This guy is going to have HERO fuck the little girls hole that is full of shit and make the resulting shit covered cock and stink filled room seem romantic

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Loved it!! But....

...next time, write more dirty talk into your story and yes, do some anal sex....i'd love to read about having his hard cock fucking his sweet little niece's asshole!

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