All Comments on 'Erotic Closure Ch. 02'

by MasterTiberius

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Don't bother

Unless you intend getting to some action rather than these endless reminiscences about old-fashioned underwear, don't bother with a continuation of this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Boring!!!!!

get to the action!!! this is like watching paint dry!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Totally turned off!

There's nothing to this - a total waste of time for the readers. Cease and desist NOW!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Still not much covered yet, lot of talk no action

I hope the story picks up soon,so far not much has happened.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Keep on writing.

I, for one, enjoy your story and feel it is refreshing not to jump to an unreal sexual encounter within a few paragraphs like so many stories on here. Please write more and take no notice of previous comments from the brain dead.

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