by alujna
A great second chapter, thank you. 5 *s and I'm looking forward to chapter 3.
I have really liked both your chapters. The thing I like most is the obvious mutual love between the pair. I saw that some people were offended by the "Daddy", but it seems appropriate to me. Still a title of authority, but one with more love and gentleness to it. I think it suits the pair well. I look forward to your next chapters.