All Comments on 'Erotic Control Ch. 02'

by alujna

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Loved it!

A great second chapter, thank you. 5 *s and I'm looking forward to chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Story

I have really liked both your chapters. The thing I like most is the obvious mutual love between the pair. I saw that some people were offended by the "Daddy", but it seems appropriate to me. Still a title of authority, but one with more love and gentleness to it. I think it suits the pair well. I look forward to your next chapters.

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