All Comments on 'Erotic Day with Strangers'

what a brilliant story, erotic day with a stranger, reading it was like being there watch it take palace awesome writing.

loved this story and found it very arousing

persuading Tracey to take her knickers off and join in was wonderful

thanks

Something about a couple gently welcoming a third into the mix is so very arousing. Great story Jules. I look forward to many more ;-)

OttawaGuy50s

As always, you guys come up with a wonderful, erotic situation. I enjoyed this one a lot. But, you really need to proofread this story. All sorts of areas where there's no punctuation, like missing commas and run on sentences, etc. Your stories are usually really tight, so this is surprising.

a hot FFM Play making good passion

Great development and love the build up! Anticipation is key in a fulfilling story! Well Done!

My only criticism is for the lack of punctuation, plus one or two spelling errors (but we all mis-spell words, occasionally). A few commas and full stops in the text, would help to make the story flow much more fluidly, adding to and enriching the story. It's a very good story and I loved it, but the lack of correct punctuation makes the reading of it very clunky!

Sweet and hot, Such a tight story! Love it. Three views intertwined build and build until...