All Comments on 'Erotic Enchantment- Sleeping Beauty'

by thewhitedragon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice but Fast

I like the story and the premise so far but I think it moved a little bit to fast.

thewhitedragonthewhitedragonover 10 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your feedback - please stay posted for the second installment Erotic Enchantments - The little mermaid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ok

but you need to write longer instalments

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
wow

I loved it

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