All Comments on 'Erotic Haunted House'

This was one hot story. Well done. I'll be looking for more from you.

This was a great story - a really original plot. It's a shame we didn't find out if they won the contest though! Very erotic, well done you!

Good idea, but the pace is too slow. The whole story would have fit on one page. Too much buildup, too much direct speach and when it came to the actual scenes in the hounted house, too much repetition, so although the idea is original, its only a medium note from me.

truely a treat..........ahhhh.........

wow..

this story honestly made me soo wet.. im like dripping in my panties right now...

i wish i was Jo...

nothing more to say! What a great story!

Great job!

Has some of my fantasies in there...vibe being taped in, someone else in control of vibe .......mmmmmm..... such a turn on .....

Love the bolts in the stocks of the guillotine.

This is probably the best story on Lit (or anywhere else for that matter). I also read Hired for Halloween, also very good. I love the pace of the story, you wouldn't be able to fit it on one page. It's perfect the way you wrote it.

I was (kind of) disappointed, with the ending — only because I was expecting a "DARK ENDING!" I mean, it's a HALLOWEEN/HAUNTED HOUSE Story…WITH, a Guillotine!

You do the Math, then see how it should've ended, "DARKLY"!

You get 5-STARS, only because your story took an "UNPREDICTABLE TURN" — otherwise, it would've been Rated 3-STARS!

More please more

can't wait for the sequel of next Halloween.

Perfect the way it is.

Love the story, well written, entertaining and hot!