All Comments on 'Escalated Desire Ch. 02'

by Grayeyedsub2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WellHungG

thought it was great very sexy hun keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Doctor Chelsea approves!

Beautifully written, with emotion and desire placed first before dialogue. I love the lack of it, and I love how I can imagine myself there with Gianna and watching.

Excellent job, Gray!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
PiercingEyes

Its really well written and very Romantic :) I love it well done hun :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
CS! Very good Gray

Quietly demanding, sensual and romantic. Nice job Gray

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