All Comments on 'Escape'

You could have made a group of stories with this sissy and escape tries but you cut yourself off. To bad

Well actually this was just supposed to be a quick introduction to Josephine. I am currently writing her origin story of how she met her dom and possibly expand into other roleplaying sessions. Didn't really have any intentions for her to try escape again. Thanks for the criticism tho :)

I like the twist that allows the story to end on a positive, consensual note!

Story is excellent, ignore the other people in the comments, they just want to see stories about abuse, which is not what BDSM is about. Your story is excellent in its realism.

Love it and it reflects a long time fantasy of my own xxxxx

Antoinette.

Wait, so his whole escape attempt + getting caught was all part of a roleplay? Thats actually pretty cool. Its nice to find a story with a fun ending, and its cute to see a dom/sub having fun together

One of my greatest unfulfilled fantasies! Wish it had happened to me!