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Click here"Don't lie to me! I want your technology, and I will break you until you give it to me!"
"You want my technology? Fine, I don't care if you foolish humans want to kill each other with it," she bellowed as her huge tits swung in every direction, "but you will not stop me from taking my revenge on Xanxaa!"
"You aren't going anywhere until you scream for mercy!" His wrinkled face was already pink from exertion, but he did not relent in pounding her cunt as hard as he could. "I may not have Xanxaa anymore, but I do have you! Look into my mind! I know you can! I will show you no mercy!!"
"What I see, general" she said softly since she had already burrowed into his mind and found the thoughts she needed, "is that you want my technology AND you want to fuck Xanxaa. Perhaps we can help each other." she said with a sly smile. " Let me go and instead of killing that shrew myself, I will bring her here for you. I will tell you exactly how to torture her so you can get the information you want. You can have her rings, you can take her knowledge, and best of all, you can fuck her without mercy for as long as you want. "
Drops of sweat were sliding down his potted face as he kept pummeling her groin with a malicious grin, "Tell me more."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoYou wrote:
"After drying themselves off, they both wearily stumbled naked into bed and enclosed their arms around the other."
(then, moments later, after never having left the bed...)
You wrote:
"He took his clothes off and then embraced Xanxaa..."
THE mantra in real estate is 'location, location, location'.
In writing, the mantra is 'continuity, continuity, continuity'.
Oops... LOL
Bodhi1978about 7 years agoJust one thing (and maybe you've answered it), but I thought Xanxaa was contemplating killing our hero...
Anonymousabout 7 years agoHey! First story I've ever commented on and I love it! Great plot for a porno and don't listen to your haters, the only thing that the story needs is titty fucking, maybe it's like her ultimate way to heal or something (for life) but Adam goes on about how huge her boobs are so I think he should fuck them!
bobrobertsonabout 7 years agoAuthorI appreciate all the feedback I've received so far, both the thoughtful and less-than-thoughtful. I take all constructive criticism as a way to improve my writing, so thank you. I hope everyone continues to read more, and I hope you enjoy it!
