by Emma1994UK
You're a wonderful writer, but there's just to much going on in this story. I found myself selecting my favorite plot and trying to weed through the many other subplots to follow the thread of my selection. Try to edit your stories. There were three contained within this one and all three were excellent but needed to be divided into three separate novellas or short stories. Thank you for writing!
I was supposed to be asleep... but I found myself too heavily invested in all the lovely characters you kept introducing. I'm glad to see things turned out so well for most of them (but poor Manyu). Good naughty fun all around!
I really enjoyed this extended story. So many characters and so much sex. Well done!