All Comments on 'Escape From the Harem'

by Emma1994UK

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
stunning

one of the best stories i have read. keep on writing please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
So much going on!

You're a wonderful writer, but there's just to much going on in this story. I found myself selecting my favorite plot and trying to weed through the many other subplots to follow the thread of my selection. Try to edit your stories. There were three contained within this one and all three were excellent but needed to be divided into three separate novellas or short stories. Thank you for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Outstanding

It keeps interest throughout.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Couldn't stop reading!

I was supposed to be asleep... but I found myself too heavily invested in all the lovely characters you kept introducing. I'm glad to see things turned out so well for most of them (but poor Manyu). Good naughty fun all around!

Writer2000Writer2000over 6 years ago
Excellent erotic story

I really enjoyed this extended story. So many characters and so much sex. Well done!

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