All Comments on 'Escape to Paradise Ch. 02'

Yes, but what about Heather?

My panties are sopping wet after reading this...

Good story. Pity of the language errors. Writer is not a native speaker, apparently and is not familiar with French either. E.g. coup de gras sounds like 'a hit with fat' (like the English word grease) and should read 'coup de grâce' (a final blow, given out of mercy with the victim). But otherwise, the realism in which the story is put, makes up for it more than enough.