All Comments on 'Espied Pt. 01'

That was so very well crafted and made a compelling read. Thank you so much. I am looking forward to the next part. Couldn't find mention of a Land Rail in the birds of the Western Palearctic !

very nicely written, absolutely on tenterhooks throughout felling Sal's vulnerability and excitement. I hope there is a follow up, thanks

Every garden needs cross pollination, just let the birds and bees do their work. The inability to turn away and her description of the garden tool next door is inspiring. A picture or two is worth thousands of words, does Sal have a new screen saver and of who ? I'm largely envious of his tool's handle, are we growing anything besides desire

A great beginning to another garden series!

I love the scenes you have set with them both. Lots more looking and touching before they touch each other, perhaps.

Please continue. Love the story. Greez Mike

I loved the well-crafted detail of Sal's arousal, and the writer's insight into her state of mind. I'm looking forward to reading on! This could turn out to be just my kind of erotica. Five stars.

Hello Max ... A great start to what I'm sure will be another incredible story! I might as well be Sal's neighbor ... I am completely naked in my backyard gardens everyday ... There are two neighbor windows that I have to look out for, that overlook my privacy fence. Barring that, I have complete sections of the garden I can walk freely nude in, unless someone looks over my fence ... It's a great place for full nudity with the tall shade trees ... I sit out there with a nice vodka drink and read Lit stories frequently! On to Chapter Two ...

Great sexy story that covers a couple of my favourite fantasies perfectly!!,,,,I would love to hear this read with a cut glass accent English female!!!!!wow!!!!