All Comments on 'Eternities'

Nice story, I hope you will be writing more, perhaps a sequel??

Thanks! Alas, no sequel is in the works for this one; not yet, anyway! We'll see if my schedule loosens up any time soon.

Oh I hope you do have time to write more, have read this story again and again and it has great promise for more chapters. 👍👍👍

I really love the skill in this stories threading, it is a stunningly beautiful life of literature. But I'm not sure how I feel about the premise even with its event originality; even saying that this is one of the best online literoticas I have read.

Why even bother? My dog writes better than this steaming pile of crap. On to fap to something else.

OMG! This is an extremely well-crafted and mesmerizing tale written with great skill and imagination.