All Comments on 'Eternity'

As with your other two submissions, this piece is truly exceptional, as well as moving. It's simply wonderful.

a very beautiful piece of writing - it was picturesque, touching, and very different to what one may find on this site. A truly meaningful piece of work. I have read your other stories and I while the styles are very different, I admit, I like those two just as much. Great job on your excellent writing!

As the previous comment stated, this was a beautiful piece of work.

An amazing piece of work.

Surely you have been touched by a muse.

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I was drawn in immediately by the descriptive writing. I felt the weather, the cold, the desolation.

I only have one criticism: too short.

This felt exotic. I was captivated and so curious as to their story. It’s probably quite sad; maybe best we know no more.