by Hard_Rom
I love a good BJ story! It's impressive that you included some Italian dialog, but you went to that well a few too many times. That, and any foreign words in an English story should be italicized.
You get four stars for giving me a boner.
You're right about the italics. Amazed the editors didn't comment on that. It was actually written for two Italian girls I know. I think they corrected the Italian. At least in one edition they did.
A lot of my stories are requested by girls I know. They let me know their likes and dislikes and I write one for them.
Gave you a boner reading, you try writing. I had to stop and relieve myself a couple times.
If you are still in contact with Chris say Hi.
I will start work on next part.