All Comments on 'Eurotica Ch. 01'

This is one of those times when the comments should preceed the story, so potential readers won't waste their time. This story has no believability to it. Awful!

I totally disagree with the above comment . I loved it and can't wait to read more.

The action was OK but the story left so much out. The set up needs to exist. We know very little about either of the people involved, who they are, why they are available for this event, etc. The end of the event prompts about as much closure to the story as saying, "She turned and walked out the door."