All Comments on 'Evan's Return'

by D. Elbee

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
mother knows her big son has what it takes

This is a fine story, by a gifted author. Evan is a big strong boy, and like most all sons he has a strong attraction to his mother's twat. Mom has watched her son grow up, and she knows that he's carrying a real hefty dick between his legs, much superior to his dad's old pecker. Julie encourages her brother to realize his urge to become a motherfucker (it doesn't take much with this lad!). Soon Evan is enjoying himself with his big stiff prick plowing his mother's cunt and his hot young balls spurting his creamy sperm again and again up his own birth canal! Too bad dad's so narrow-minded, he could've let his boy have a son's share of his mother's pussy, enough there for both of them. Dad passes away, and Evan returns to reclaim the mommy-cunt that is his by right. After all, where else does a boy's big hard on belong but up his own mother's wide-open twat?

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
I liked it.

Thanks for a good story. I really enjoyed this submission.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
really well written,hot and erotic

Very well done, hot and erotic, plus a lot of tender love. Thanks for the good story

L.A. WickerL.A. Wickerover 12 years ago
Nice!

A little rushed, slow down and give more details.

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